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SPN Fic - "Sure"

Title: Sure
Author: [info]mad_server
Rating: PG13
Characters: Dean, Sam
Word Count: 100, on the button
Summary: After Sam saves him from the djinn, Dean loses it a little.
A/N: This is a missing scene for WIAWNSB. It was written for the Enkidu07/Onyx Moonbeam drabble challenge extraordinaire at ff.net, for the prompt word "hitch."
Disclaimer: I don't own these guys. You would know, because I would be bragging.



Halfway to the car Dean swallows and says, "Sam?" He hands the girl off, bends double and retches on the dirty tiles. Hands shaking, he sits in back with her, keeps her from falling off the seat.

At the hospital he lets Sam do the talking, his own head hot and muddled and they take the girl away but it's Mom and Jess they're taking, all transactions final and his breath hitches and Sam's hand is cool in the small of his back, Sam's voice asking softly if he's sure he won't let the nurse check him over.

Dean's sure.

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Comments

Aw poor Dean! You really captured what he ust have been going through in that episode so well!
He angsts so pretty. :) Thank you so much!
Ouch! This story packs a punch in just a little bit-- I'm sure Dean's never been more sure about the nurse thing. Great job!
Especially if she's hot... and looks like Carmen......

Thanks!
It is amazing how much is felt behind just those 100 words, almost like you wrote 10000. You are one of the few people I'll read these really short fictions from. I always hope you'll write more.

Thanks for the hurt!Dean fic!

Plus your icon rocks!
Wow. I'm smiling so big right now. Thanks!
(delayed reaction)

And you're welcome to use this icon if you want!
...all transactions final

Oh. Ouch. You always make me want to cuddle our poor Dean-o. Lovely, my dear.
I think you should. I think you should wrap yourself around him and put a cloth on his face and just, nuzzle him. And then when your boyfriend gets home, send Dean to me...
I'm not generally a fan of drabbles, but you managed to capture the moment beautifully here. Nothing to spare, but nothing left out.
So kind! Thank you! *doffs hat*
Oh Dean... His pain and anguish hit me so hard I almost cried. Your fic never fails to amaze me. Well done :)
I really angsted it up with this one, huh? I re-watched WIAWNSB for challenge drabble inspiration and that look Sam gives Dean as Dean is unhooking the girl and soothing her, it just hurt. Thank you so much for the fabulous feedback!
Oh Dean! I like this, it really feels like what could have happened. There's so much here for just a 100 words.
*beams*

Really glad it works for you! I love the Dean angst factor in that ep.
I don't know how I missed this but, wow! This drabble really packed a punch. I want to take Dean away and mother him so much after reading this!
I think he'd like that. Secretly, of course... ;)

Thanks again!

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